why people always choose fast foods and how it affects a healthy lifestyle..
why people always choose fast foods and how it affects a healthy lifestyle.
The instructor wants a 3 page essay from the previous one I submitted which is the week 5 assignment (see attached document 1). she commented about the week5 assignment saying; For Revision!! While writing your body paragraphs, work on always choosing specifics over generalities- something the reader can actually see in the mind’s eye. You do have some errors, but I know this is the planning stage- just be sure to proofread and to use grammar check and spellcheck once you’ve completed your essay, having others proofread for you as well. Finally, you do not have topic sentences, and these are just extremely crucial- a full topic sentence with a transition for each paragraph- see I, II, and III. Finally, I attached the instructions and the rubic for scoring (attached document 2). she also said, Note: No research is allowed. These ideas and details must come from your own experiences and knowledge only.